More then once the close up’s for characters are disproportional. On top of it, while the covers look fine the art isn’t great. A classmate is introduced as a potential rival for Moe’s affections but looking at the title… why did the author bother unless it was going to be a different firefighter? Kyosuke’s co-workers are good natured stereotypes of manly men. Ryu is Moe’s younger brother who serves as an excuse since he’s obsessed with firefighters, for Moe to keep going to firefighter events. Sayumi is Moe’s classmate and closest person to a friend she has. So much promise… but so little return in two volumes.Īs for the secondary characters they’re all shojo staples. At this point despite Ebihara’s story despite being the focus, this element isn’t elaborated on nor does it seem to be a priority.

Perhaps there’s a reason he became so embarrassingly tsundere but in eight chapters, that there is in fact a backstory. He’s a hot older fireman who happens to keep saving Moe in all the whacky hijinks she’s written into. The extended problem is Ebihara Kyosuke isn’t much to write home about either. Moe’s only motivation the entire story so far is to ‘get to know Ebihara Kyosuke’, the fireman who hoisted her down to safety.

She is replaced with the most common troupes of a pure hearted maiden, without even one of them being exaggerated to some degree to make a makeshift personality. The troubled, brooding teen who misses her father of the opening scene is discarded by page twenty five. In a mere eight chapters, only the first two volumes I’ve read enough to get where this story is going to spin out both forms.Ī lot of them stems from the fact that Moe has no personality.

Now I’m going to be very honest, aside from the actual first chapter MBIO is boring even for shojo standards. She laments his loss on the rooftop while smoking, she is startled by a fireman approaching her and informing her she should have evacuated the building for the drill! Embarrassed, she is hoisted down to safety, and by happenstance continues to run into him! Sasaki Moe transferred high school’s due to the untimely death of her father and is not adjusting well.

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